refactor(about): clean metadata for achievements

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/src/a/resume.md b/src/a/resume.md
index 3746e29..61e8001 100644
--- a/src/a/resume.md
+++ b/src/a/resume.md
@@ -41,21 +41,20 @@ template: resume
 
 - Hardware Devops Engineer
   <br>[Scaleway](https://scaleway.com) *(2022-04 to 2023-06)*
-  - software engineering, maintenance and CI/CD
+  - software engineering and automation for internal tools
   - agnostic firmware management for dozens of server types
   - site-reliability of pre-production assembly line
-  - bare-metal software + system debugging
+  - remote debugging of bare-metal systems
   - orchestration of BMCs, NICs, BIOS configuration
 
 - Devops Engineer
   <br>[VIPERdev](https://viperdev.io) *(2021-07 to 2022-03)*
-  - infrastructure maintenance and deployments to production
-  - backend development, agile methodology and code review
+  - infrastructure maintenance and production deployments
+  - backend development, agile methodology and code reviews
   - cloud providers such as: digitalocean / scaleway / netlify
-  - gitlab-ci, ansible, terraform
-  - takeover of existing projects
+  - usage of gitlab-ci, ansible, terraform
 
-- Backend developer, intern
+- Backend Developer
   <br>[VIPERdev](https://viperdev.io) *(2021-04 to 2021-06)*
   - backend development and code review
   - contribution and maintenance to existing projects
@@ -64,18 +63,19 @@ template: resume
   <br>[for personal use](/a/homelab.html) *(since 2020)*
   - with OpenBSD + FreeBSD
 
-- Level designe
+- Level designer
   <br>[Resistance and Liberation](https://web.archive.org/web/20190924032538/https://resistance-and-liberation.com/) *(2018-07 to 2020-11)*
   - on Unreal Engine 4
-  - level design and maintenance of game assets
-  - game logic and events via blueprints
+  - realistic level design for 32 player maps
+  - creation and maintenance of artistic game assets
+  - gameplay logic with blueprints
   - feedback loop with weekly testing sessions
 
-- Modder / Level designer
+- Modder and Level designer
   <br>[for various gaming communities](/a/level-design.html) *(2017 to 2019)*
   - on the Source Engine
   - 32 players maps with bot support and game-engine scripting
-  - creation and modifications to 2D and 3D assets
+  - creation and modifications of 2D and 3D assets
 
 ## references
 
@@ -95,18 +95,20 @@ template: resume
 
 ## achievements
 
-- Co-organizer of [the Ktarnaval (2024)](https://sousleciel.lol/projects/ktarnaval-2024.html)
+- Event co-organizer
+  <br>[the Ktarnaval](https://sousleciel.lol/projects/ktarnaval-2024.html) *(2024 edition)*
   - an underground carnival with 80+ musicians and 300+ persons
   - in the old quarries under Paris
 
-- Artist at [Les Extatiques (2024)](https://interstices.in/les-extatiques-descendent-dans-les-sous-sols-de-paris-la-defense/)
+- Artist printmaker
+  <br>[Les Extatiques](https://sousleciel.lol/projects/les-extatiques-2024.html) *(2024 edition)*
   - creation, production and installation of [rust printed plants](https://sousleciel.lol/projects/future-nostalgie.html)
   - exhibition in the underground of Paris La Defense
   - in collaboration with [Mel Piat](https://melpiat.com)
 
 ## certifications
 
-- Electrical accreditation (France): H0 - B0 - BS - Be manoeuvre
+- Electrical accreditation *(France)*: H0 - B0 - BS - Be manoeuvre
 
 ## preferences